Ah!
Not bad work with the pads my friend.
Of course In my opinion for it to be a better ambient piece...maybe make the pad leads introduce the track..and maybe inlcude some reverbated(or even chorused) bass...(maybe some sub bass)
And i mean just the pads...no percussions or anything like that...just kinda make it smooth with the help of Low Pass filtering.
Food For Thought.
Nice Job.
Hey man.
I like the idea behind the track...quite well thought of.
Of course i cant put my finger on what genre (exactly) this is supposed to be...
If its Hardstyle, then it needs more screams...
If its Gabber/Hardcore it needs a bigger distKick.
Ionno really.
Food For Thought.
Keep it Up.
Lol, neither of those. Hard dance is what it's meant to be. Check out my other tracks called "Treelopper" or "Acid Overdose" if you prefer to hear my hardstyle tracks :)
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Very Good Dubstep man.
Of course you couldve layered something FATTER and more GREASY on tope of the current wobble and add a tonn of reverb to it to make the track FLY!
Food for thought.
Great work.
Thanks mate, my dubstep tracks tend to be very melodic, rather than the 'random rythmic noise' that people expect dubstep to be nowadays. :D
Sorry man...
I hear nothing original here :l
its not supposed to be original. Its a cover song for an upcomming episode of Game it or Hate it.
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I just have one question..
How come the guitar track is panned solely to the left, and the drum track solely to the right?
:L
Good point! I think it had to do with some recording settings.
I'l need to dig up the raw file to fix this. Thanks for letting me know.
Shit man You're back....
What can i say...track is alright for some...dark, underground,( ambient?) techno...
but theres two problems and you may already know one of them...
One is Mastering. The lead synth needs to be mastered so its not "killing" the rest of the track. You need to blend all of the elements of the song together so you can a nice mix. Try things like compression and equalizing to achieve a better result.
Second is your Composition. Your chords are...well...not really the best i've heard. They start out nice...but then quickly become out of tune and just...*shudder* not good :/
Im not trying to undermine you or anything but...im just trying to point out the things that i think that need to be worked on for your productions to sound better.
Food For Thought.
Keep it up.
Mastering... yeah I'm totaly f*ked up in that because I don't know a thing about mastering :D
About the chords.
I can't realy start and continue "Progressively" because I lack the skill to make it all connect you know.
Overall. I'm realy a bad user of Fruity loops.
Everything I know is from "toying" with it.
Thus I can never fully create what I want.
Hey man...
GREAT.FUCKEN.USE.OF.ZETA!!11!!(sounds like zeta) (oh and sidecchain too)
Also the whitenoise is killer and the melodies just..UGH (*fap*fap*fap)
But...
And yes...theres a but..
Snare is awkward.
Drum kick is awkward.
My Opinion.
In the actual Beat track...just layer a clap and a snare (make em sounds a little Deadmou5ey you know?) and im not saying you can get it perfect but just layer those two and you should be golden...also if you threw in some rev'd snares or hats to fill it up a bit....would've made the beat track that much more MONSTER!
Oh and also...another thing i wouldve done..at that tiny drop on 0:38 i would've snapped off the filter cutoff for the whitenoise a little later...doing that will again fill your track up...and will eliminate the need to layer your leads to make them sound HUGE.
Food For Thought.
Keep it up.
Thank you so much for your review! This is exactly what i need, and i know exactly what you mean, but im always failing when trying to fill up my songs :P Im really trying to learn new stuff to get top quality sound :P I will look on your review for my next song ;D Thanks again ^^
Hmm.
The beginning is quite nice....but just after that...the whole "Drum and Bass" element is completely gone out the window....(my opinion)
To be honest the percussions in the begginning are just "scattered " all over the place.which to me sounds extremely unpleasant. (but hey its just me)
Also the Synth that starts at around the 53 second mark...sounds completely out of place...again notes are scattered and just everywhere...they dont seem to fall into a proper pattern that can be followed.
So all i can say is..keep the kick...keep the storm bass...but everything sounds like its out of tune and out of place..
Food For Thought.
Good luck.
Thanks for the review buddy. Will definitely be listening to your review and I'll try to make my material sound less out of tune and try and develop a proper pattern :)
Hey not bad.
Of course for a house track like that...it's gonna need a bit more reverb to make it really fly (you know?)
The percussions are nice and all....but theyre useless without good transitions...your transitions are....ok at some points....but near the end of the track it kinds seemed that you're just turning tracks on/off which makes the whole mix sound kinds stale... if you gotta stretch out the track just for the transitions...by all means it could only make it better..
Food For Thought.
Cheers.
Hey man, thanks for the advice. yeah I could of pumped up the reverb a bit more for a house track your right.
and yeah near the end I did kinda get lazy transition-wise xD.
Aw man...this sounds great man.
I mean i've done house for a little while and i couldnt really get my sound to get that more chilled (Thought i could've go over the edge with the ambiences and such but it never worked out)
It's a very good loop...if maybe i could use it in a production, (give you most of the credit) then i could make something nice out of it :) (with your permission of course)
Thanks for ur time Waidmann
good vibes.
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