Hey man.
Not bad with the piano, but its getting a little stale after the first 10 seconds already.
The cure to that is arpeggiating it a little (My opinion). Overall the song starts off nice...but it drags on for a good 40 seconds....if you arpeggiated it throughout that time span with some soft string chords...most probably would sound alot better :)
Food for thought my friend.
Keep it up.